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lifeslight
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since 2002-08-06
Posts 15


0 posted 2002-08-11 01:41 AM



Oh that feeling I get when im with you,
That unforgetable, unresistable, magical feeling.
I cannot feel my body, and cannot think or act, My heart is the one in play, and I cannot withstand it. It lifts me off my feet, takes me beyond the stars and beyond the universe. And I can even feel it when im not with you, i can even feel it when i only hear your voice. I cant hold it in, i need to let it out, i love it, i am addicted, i am seduced by the ultimate power of love. This everlasting periodical timeline of methotical, warm hearted feeling that I am afraid to lose, is over powering and uncontrolable, I feel like Im going to explode happyness, warmth and light....
Oh That Feeling....

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-08-11 02:10 AM


lifeslight,
you pen this feeling well.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



doreen peri
Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
2 posted 2002-08-11 10:13 AM


i KNOW this feeling.....

ahhhhhhhhhargghhhhhahhhhhhh

damn!

delicious insanity.... LOVE..... yes!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-08-11 10:15 AM


Yep, that pretty much defines it.
Aint love grande??   Wonderful write!

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

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