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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-08-10 10:21 PM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-08-10 10:24 PM


This is so very beautiful, Marge...
I think you look great in feathers...
~ feathery hugs from a chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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2 posted 2002-08-10 11:44 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is exquisite darling heart utterly utterly exquisite. I love it, you have to know this is incredibly beautiful and the words again matched to the image perfectly. Superb writing darling heart truly superb

I wub you

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-08-10 11:59 PM


Marge, this is just beautiful.
Kethry
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4 posted 2002-08-11 02:28 AM


Marge, such a flight of fancy you have penned. Exquisite.

Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2002-08-11 09:39 AM


Marge dear, you do know how much these words mean to me don't you?  This is beautiful,
and very truthful.  Thank you for the delightful read.  Hugs.

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-08-11 09:44 AM


Have you ever considered renting out your
talent for superb graphics that always seem
to fit just perfectly with the words of
your powerful poems.....???? HUH???

Trillium
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7 posted 2002-08-11 02:58 PM


Marge:  An exquisite piece of art work and the picture is quite nice too!

Betty Lou Hebert

ethome
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8 posted 2002-08-11 03:18 PM


Beautiful feathers Marge! Beautiful thoughts....strong enough is absolutely right!
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-08-11 03:19 PM


Marge,
Your work is always a delight to read.

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2002-08-11 05:22 PM


Friends~
I sincerely appreciate you all ...
This little piece has endeared itself to me ... not just because it's kinda purty ... but because several have seen themselves in it ... and are enjoying the flight~

I write to share feelings and in allowing me to do so with you .. you have filled this poet's heart to overflowing~

May soft feathering encircle you all~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Krissy
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11 posted 2002-08-11 05:44 PM


Auntie Margie girl Hi there, your writing is excellent do you know that? You have the ability to write the thought so beautifully. This is simply perfect in its flow and style, and this perfect piece of beauty is wonderful.

Do you have any idea how special and brilliant your writing is? I see in your writing how a writer of heart can be a writer of magic I watch your quill unfold such wonder and I’m awed. I know I’ll never be the calibre of writer you

I can’t wait till September, I am so looking forward to meeting you, I’m so excited the anticipation is wonderful, prepare to be hugged mercilessly. And I’ll get the chance to chat up Bill, and maybe spirit away Dallas. She stole into my heart while I wasn’t looking…….. can’t you loan her to me? Okay I’ll just have to borrow you instead.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2002-08-11 06:12 PM


KrissySweetKrissy~
It is with eager anticipation that I count the days until the arrival of September~
I shall thoroughly enjoy being *hugged* and *hugged* and *hugged* ...

Thank you, love ... for the glow you place in my heart~
Glad you enjoyed this little piece ...
*Hugs* ... n' lots of me wub you's~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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