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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-08-10 09:41 PM



To me, through clay clouds beating through the earth
Images of thunder hooves to pound of building girth
To me, full run in lathered flail and driven gasping scent
In gypsy bands, where evil lands and silver dreams dement

To me, through portals of the painted sandstone rising high
Omega, on the uphill flats where windswept cliffs defy
To me, wide ranges plunge into the river course untamed
In single whim, to drive the harem to high ground un-named

To me, so proudly raised in gallop full and ego broad
Ominous, the prince in turn full well and rear of bondage gnawed
To me, in picture perfect freedom pounds the dusty desert plains
In total reconcile, dominates these wild and flowing painted manes

Copyright Kkh 8/8/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-08-10 09:44 PM



To me, through clay clouds beating through the earth
Images of thunder hooves to pound of building girth
To me, full run in lathered flail and driven gasping scent
In gypsy bands, where evil lands and silver dreams dement

I love this totally gorgeous imagery, Kathy...
I wish I could write this way...
~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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2 posted 2002-08-10 09:45 PM



First wolves, now horses...
ThisDiamond...a dare...
paint the wind...

loving this!

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-08-10 10:57 PM




Wow!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, remember that I would love to write with you on wild stallions also, I love he thundering vision of this! (kiss on cheek) This is awesome, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-10-2002 10:58 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-08-10 11:11 PM


Yes,  I agree with Sun,  first wolves,
then wild horses......how about something
hard......not that those are not....

Today tells me different.....

Excellent words Kathy.....

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