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Crystal moon |
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han_tigger Member
since 2002-08-10
Posts 50Thundersley, Essex, Uk |
Crystal moon. Under the moons eye, Walking in its path, In the shadow of the night. It glistens half crescent, far beyond the trees And shines on every hamlet, dale and valley, Its glow softly fills the night. The stars blink in their cosy caverns, And nestle like birds at dawn. We settle in its crevices, Curled up in the nights blankets, Snug amongst the stars. Glistening like a snow globe, Leaves tumbling down. A globe of bright glistening sequins, moving in the light. The black night glowing with fireflies, Sparkling in the darkness. The moon shining in the dark, A peephole to glimpse through, Like a notch in the ocean, A pinhole in the night. I gaze intrigued, Entangled in its richness, Entranced by its wonders, And enticed by its allure. I feel softly surrounded by its blankets, The blankets of the night. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Welcome to Passions. This is a wonderful poem to debut with. The moon in all is mystery seems to lend itself well to poetry. You've done a great job here. In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Very beautiful entrance you have made.. filled with wonderful imagery. I look forward to more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a beautiful debut, I love the moon and am excited to see the star showers tonight, the moon too gives me a special spiritual smile, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Han Tigger, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, ooohhhhhh...and be sure to check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Han, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Han, Welcome to Passions! You're going to like it very much as you peek and poke around to find all the avenues of adventure awaiting you... I'm looking forward to reading more from you. Karilea |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely descriptive poem....so tranquil... Just the thing to do on a quiet and still cool evening... Welcome to Passions, enjoy yourself.... |
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