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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-08-10 04:15 PM


Melting Ice
as water boils
at the sight and feel of you
tracing the length of me
in cool heat.

A hush, a whisper.  A sound
from the depths of your soul
into my own, clashing
of echoed sighs

How long is forever
you whisper in my ear
as I smile, knowing
you already know

Forever I will
trace the lace of you
as your eyes in smile
trace the lace of me


© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-08-10 04:37 PM


Magnus, This is so romantic. You really know how to make a woman *sigh*

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

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2 posted 2002-08-10 04:47 PM


Oh Dang Barry!  I just melted completely...
my legs gave way and I heaved one giant
*SIGH*
Bet they heard me over in Detroit!
Well, someone had better come scoop me up!
~Hugs to you sexy poet~

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3 posted 2002-08-10 05:07 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Barry, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always write such wonderful romance, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-08-10 05:12 PM


Forever I will
trace the lace of you
as your eyes in smile
trace the lace of me

Oh this is so romantic, Barry.  You are going to have all the women here swooning...
better get the smelling salts fast!

I heard Nancy's sigh all the way over here in Kalamazoo...and thats about 140 miles west of Detroit....
that was a LOUD sigh!

~ hugs for a beautiful poem


Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (08-10-2002 05:13 PM).]

WhiteRose
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5 posted 2002-08-10 06:03 PM


I went and took a *cold* shower.

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

Suetang
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6 posted 2002-08-10 06:45 PM


Hello Barry

So sensual and beautiful were these words which certainly made me melt, as do all of your marvellous words.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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7 posted 2002-08-10 07:30 PM



And where did this idea come from?
Now...go and find another...

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8 posted 2002-08-10 07:33 PM


Barry - another wonderful romantic poem from your pen/keyboard - just loved this - Paul
Magnus
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9 posted 2002-08-10 07:56 PM


Gee Sun,  I think I was inspired.

Now,  let me see if I can remember where
the inspiration came from????????

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10 posted 2002-08-10 08:04 PM


That was absolutely gorgeous.
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11 posted 2002-08-11 12:10 PM


Your words are the flutter of love.
You have carried me away with the gentle calling of:

"echod sighs",

and Oh my God,

"feel of you tracing the length of me in cool heat".

HOT,HOT. Loved it.

beauiful write.

SimplyGold

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12 posted 2002-08-11 12:14 PM


~SIGH~

Mr Romance at his finest!
Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Martie
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13 posted 2002-08-11 12:21 PM


Barry

A forever love is the best kind!  (squeeze)

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14 posted 2002-08-11 01:01 PM


Par Excellence!

My favorite passages:

"as water boils
                        at the sight and feel of you"

and

"trace the lace of you"

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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