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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2002-08-10 01:22 AM



I never said today would last forever
Not a word or thought crossed my mind
that someday I would have to say goodbye
to all the ones I love
each day passes by
a moment lost and forever never to return
hurt softly heart broken
so many times before
depressed and repressed
forever together
with heaven with you


© Copyright 2002 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-10 09:18 AM


Kellie~
You process some deep feelings through your poetry ...
This is a poignant feel~
*Hugs* soaring to hold you~
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2002-08-10 09:25 AM


the sadness in your words, coupled with that painful picture of innocence in confusion breaks my heart--hey, you? talk to me ANYTIME...I am "soliwitch" on yahoo...and icq? #157414428...and all the others? still puzzle me...smiles and hugs.
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3 posted 2002-08-10 11:55 AM


Kellie - you write well of this sadness. Best to you...

BC

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4 posted 2002-08-10 12:33 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Kellie, this is powerful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I know it can be so hard but keep your chin up because promises are coming your way! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kellie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-08-10 12:35 PM


I never said today would last forever
Not a word or thought crossed my mind
that someday I would have to say goodbye

Sad sad thoughts, Kellie...but very beautifully written.
~ hugs from my heart

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-08-10 02:52 PM


to you. We're always here, Kellie!

~Beth

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

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