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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2002-08-10 01:19 AM



Lovely Leopards Little Lungs
Full from forevers face
as any air
enters even
softly sun sets
beneath better blood

© Copyright 2002 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-10 02:12 AM


Alliteration is too kewl--I love to use that device myself. I confess, I'm not quite sure of the meaning, but half the time? I feel the same way about my own stuff. Peace, you.
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2 posted 2002-08-10 10:46 AM


Kellie~
I like your alliteration piece~
It's funny how thoughts flow through us ...
and wend their way to create some mysterious pieces~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2002-08-10 01:19 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Kellie, this is powerfully graceful, sweet friend, this leaped out like a gazelle, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kellie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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4 posted 2002-08-10 01:26 PM


A lovely alliteration, Kellie...
~ weekend hugs

Lyra

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