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0 posted 2002-08-09 10:47 PM


He's Trying To Take My Dog
~By Sue~

He doesn't seem to think it is enough
That he torments me with his drinking
He's trying to take my dog (Barney), too
My patience he seems to be trying

Barney is just a helpless little dog
He may not ever bring him back again
He might just leave him with someone
And never tell me where he is

He was only six weeks old when I got him
He has no right to take him away from me
Barney was given to me when very young
He didn't even want me to get Barney

8-9-02




© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-09 10:52 PM




(big hugggsssssss of sympathy) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you, Bareney most clearly belongs to you for Barney was given to you, he loves you and not to him! My heart goes out to you and encourages you to stay strong and guide Barney with your love, I'm here if you need someone to talk to, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-08-09 11:01 PM


DON'T let him get away with it! Hugs Sue.

~Beth

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-08-09 11:09 PM


Call the police, Sue...
He can't take your dog!

good luck sweetie....
~ lots of hopefully helpful hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-08-09 11:26 PM


He's not just trying to take your dog--he's trying to take your spirit! grrrrr....y'got me seething here...

If this guy is your husband? Take the credit card, and go buy something really expensive--and then tell him you will return the item--if he returns the dog! grrrrr.....

(serenity exits, backspacing expletives...)

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5 posted 2002-08-09 11:31 PM


Everyone is right Sue. I know it's hard. I've been where you are. You have to stand your ground and tell him the DOG STAYS!!

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

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