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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2002-08-09 09:50 PM



A happy north
from a blank star
in which nothing follows
a fall in compact distraught
by human kindly raced
Happy falls flap
naughty highlands
fill the gap
sordid hunny
mummy wants to say a funny
in a happy north
you will forth come
Happy Falls
---Crazy poem----

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1 posted 2002-08-09 09:55 PM




Wow, I feel funny saying this but when i read this beautiful happy poem it reminded me of Christmas! LOL! I guess because Santa's workshop is on the North Pole in stories and the North Star resembles such the promise Jesus brings! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet freind, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kellie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kellie_Cantrell
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2 posted 2002-08-09 09:56 PM


wanna hear something crazy!!! when i was writing it i was singing jingle bells. lol
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Beneath the northern stars
3 posted 2002-08-09 10:30 PM


Sounds like you had a fun time writing this, Kellie!

~Beth

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

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