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Soleil Noir
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0 posted 2002-08-09 04:29 PM



Soleil Tracings – 2

It becomes the standing joke

who will last
longest
when heat rises

and tracings
begin

finger talk
over pillows
and silk

shh-shing whispers
and jiggling
laughter

afternoon delights
going into the night…

you say you will,
stamina, after all…

and I wink

in delighted knowing,

because it’s you
who keeps going
for more ice…

while I?
I just keep glowing…





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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-08-09 04:33 PM


Excuse me while I have to leave the comp.
for a while.......my monitor is overheating
and so am I....

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-08-09 04:38 PM


Oh Soleil...my my....warm enough for you?
Or perhaps you need more ice?
Another sultry, sensual write from you again today!
Lovely, lovely, ooooooh yes!
~Hugs~

Magnus
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3 posted 2002-08-09 04:38 PM


The ice he brought to cool the brow
as flames of passion licked his toes
Walking in slowly, wondering how
it is always her in the end

that knows!

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4 posted 2002-08-09 07:00 PM


"and I wink

in delighted knowing,

because it’s you
who keeps going
for more ice…

while I?
I just keep glowing…"




Wow!!! Oh my gosh, now this sure felt hot, I need to go outside and find a cool place in the shade! (kiss on cheek) The passion of your words is always glowing bright, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thak you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2002-08-09 08:14 PM


who will last
longest
when heat rises

and tracings
begin

finger talk
over pillows
and silk

shh-shing whispers
and jiggling
laughter

afternoon delights
going into the night
=================================


Oh....oh yeah ... ya make a moth proud with this one...
and...to this and part one..I have to say...
(IWIHWT) Must be nice to be this inspire poetess Noir  


Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2002-08-09 10:27 PM


SoleilNoir~
I love the tease and please of the entire piece ...
but this ......

'tracings
begin

finger talk
over pillows
and silk'


whispers my name ....

Night-night~
I've gotta go practice that 'finger talk'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-08-09 10:34 PM


afternoon delights
going into the night…

you say you will,
stamina, after all…

and I wink

in delighted knowing,

because it’s you
who keeps going
for more ice…

Wow...its hot in here, Soliel....
and we had just gotten our cool weather back for a while...
afternoon delights
going into the night…

you say you will,
stamina, after all…

and I wink

in delighted knowing,

because it’s you
who keeps going
for more ice…

afternoon delights
going into the night…

you say you will,
stamina, after all…

and I wink

in delighted knowing,

because it’s you
who keeps going
for more ice…

Whew!!!!  It was just so cool in here a moment ago...
where did this sudden blast of heat come from....
It must be a power surge or this saucy poem!
~ hugs and *winks*

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Martie
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8 posted 2002-08-09 10:38 PM


Soleil

I've been told some stories about ice, even told a few myself...but coming from you here in this poem, the ice seems to melt.


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