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Soleil Tracings - 1

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Soleil Noir
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0 posted 08-09-2002 10:51 AM       View Profile for Soleil Noir   Email Soleil Noir   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Soleil Noir



Soleil Tracings - 1

For you, I should become
a palette
as oils of youth and middle age
become as one again

Or perhaps ivory
under fingertips,
as you shall brush me warm
in ways of blush
then carve with hands
to pinken ivory

Perhaps, I am best
as parchment,
wearing well your words of warm
as you draw intentions Arabic
one two three

and my navel
shall be your inkwell

where fine silk
may hide
your signature

in curl of musk

~*~

if I were to ask you
to just know me

I wonder
if you would open the book
to the middle,
or if you would start
at the beginning
reading your way to the end
snacking in-between
on strawberries placed here,
and here...

or do you think
that in your ways,
simply placing your hands
on the parchment
will tell you everything
you need
to know?

Thank you,
for loving me in little ways...
knowing I ask
for nothing
more
© Copyright 2002 Soleil Noir - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


1 posted 08-09-2002 11:02 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

and my navel
shall be your inkwell

where fine silk
may hide
your signature

in curl of musk

~*~

if I were to ask you
to just know me

I wonder
if you would open the book
to the middle,
or if you would start
at the beginning
reading your way to the end
snacking in-between
on strawberries placed here,
and here...
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Oh Soleil...this is...THIS simply 'IS'!
Do you know what I mean?
But of course, you are a woman and you just know.
Love this...so soft, delicate and sensual.
~Hugs~
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 08-09-2002 11:06 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms noir

I might have to go back to quill
if you are going to be doing the navel
well thing...wonder if that would tickle?
this was lovely ms, enjoyed it.
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Deep in the heart


3 posted 08-09-2002 11:17 AM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

I think I would prefer finger painting and let your whole body be my palette

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marge Tindal
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SoleilNoir~

'~*~

if I were to ask you
to just know me

I wonder
if you would open the book
to the middle,
or if you would start
at the beginning
reading your way to the end
snacking in-between
on strawberries placed here,
and here...

or do you think
that in your ways,
simply placing your hands
on the parchment
will tell you everything
you need
to know?

Thank you,
for loving me in little ways...
knowing I ask
for nothing
more


A huge WOW !
This piece is just lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (08-09-2002 02:23 PM).]

Magnus
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Can I borrow the inkwell....seems mine
just got a dry as my throat has....
hrrrrrumph..... Aaaaaak!

Nicely written Soleil......OH YES IT IS>>>>
Sven
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6 posted 08-09-2002 04:41 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

tracings of the soul. . .

well found SN. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel
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"For you, I should become
a palette
as oils of youth and middle age
become as one again

Or perhaps ivory
under fingertips,
as you shall brush me warm
in ways of blush
then carve with hands
to pinken ivory"




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, you speak of love and passion so well always, this is no exception, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, swet Soleil, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Janet Marie
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Perhaps, I am best
as parchment,
wearing well your words of warm
as you draw intentions Arabic
one two three

and my navel
shall be your inkwell

where fine silk
may hide
your signature

in curl of musk


~*~

if I were to ask you
to just know me

I wonder
if you would open the book
to the middle,
or if you would start
at the beginning
reading your way to the end
snacking in-between
on strawberries placed here,
and here...

or do you think
that in your ways,
simply placing your hands
on the parchment
will tell you everything
you need
to know?
===========================

have mercy....where did this come from????
may i PLEEEEEEEASSSSSEEEE HAVE SOME....
this is such a wonderful moment of inspire Soleil ... my goodness...how lovely..and on the page I saw there was more? I am off to inhale it...but am keeping this one on my way out..........
Madame Chipmunk
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since 12-05-2001
Posts 8552
Michigan


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or do you think
that in your ways,
simply placing your hands
on the parchment
will tell you everything
you need
to know?

Soliel...I was looking for this one last night when I replied to #2.
I finally found it and it was well worth the search....
You are an extraordinary poet, who is the mistress of understatement.
~ understated hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Brad_Smith
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10 posted 01-09-2004 10:12 PM       View Profile for Brad_Smith   Email Brad_Smith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad_Smith

for some reason this poem fills me with the urge to dive into deep water. simply succulent
 
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