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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-08-09 10:51 AM

Soleil Tracings - 1

For you, I should become
a palette
as oils of youth and middle age
become as one again

Or perhaps ivory
under fingertips,
as you shall brush me warm
in ways of blush
then carve with hands
to pinken ivory

Perhaps, I am best
as parchment,
wearing well your words of warm
as you draw intentions Arabic
one two three

and my navel
shall be your inkwell

where fine silk
may hide
your signature

in curl of musk

~*~

if I were to ask you
to just know me

I wonder
if you would open the book
to the middle,
or if you would start
at the beginning
reading your way to the end
snacking in-between
on strawberries placed here,
and here...

or do you think
that in your ways,
simply placing your hands
on the parchment
will tell you everything
you need
to know?

Thank you,
for loving me in little ways...
knowing I ask
for nothing
more

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-08-09 11:02 AM

and my navel
shall be your inkwell

where fine silk
may hide
your signature

in curl of musk

~*~

if I were to ask you
to just know me

I wonder
if you would open the book
to the middle,
or if you would start
at the beginning
reading your way to the end
snacking in-between
on strawberries placed here,
and here...
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Oh Soleil...this is...THIS simply 'IS'!
Do you know what I mean?
But of course, you are a woman and you just know.
Love this...so soft, delicate and sensual.
~Hugs~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2002-08-09 11:06 AM

ms noir

I might have to go back to quill
if you are going to be doing the navel
well thing...wonder if that would tickle?
this was lovely ms, enjoyed it.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-08-09 11:17 AM

I think I would prefer finger painting and let your whole body be my palette

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-08-09 02:04 PM

SoleilNoir~

'~*~

if I were to ask you
to just know me

I wonder
if you would open the book
to the middle,
or if you would start
at the beginning
reading your way to the end
snacking in-between
on strawberries placed here,
and here...

or do you think
that in your ways,
simply placing your hands
on the parchment
will tell you everything
you need
to know?

Thank you,
for loving me in little ways...
knowing I ask
for nothing
more

A huge WOW !
This piece is just lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (08-09-2002 02:23 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-08-09 02:29 PM

Can I borrow the inkwell....seems mine
just got a dry as my throat has....
hrrrrrumph..... Aaaaaak!

Nicely written Soleil......OH YES IT IS>>>>

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-08-09 04:41 PM

tracings of the soul. . .

well found SN. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-08-09 06:57 PM

"For you, I should become
a palette
as oils of youth and middle age
become as one again

Or perhaps ivory
under fingertips,
as you shall brush me warm
in ways of blush
then carve with hands
to pinken ivory"

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, you speak of love and passion so well always, this is no exception, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, swet Soleil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2002-08-09 08:09 PM

Perhaps, I am best
as parchment,
wearing well your words of warm
as you draw intentions Arabic
one two three

and my navel
shall be your inkwell

where fine silk
may hide
your signature

in curl of musk

~*~

if I were to ask you
to just know me

I wonder
if you would open the book
to the middle,
or if you would start
at the beginning
reading your way to the end
snacking in-between
on strawberries placed here,
and here...

or do you think
that in your ways,
simply placing your hands
on the parchment
will tell you everything
you need
to know?
===========================

have mercy....where did this come from????
may i PLEEEEEEEASSSSSEEEE HAVE SOME....
this is such a wonderful moment of inspire Soleil ... my goodness...how lovely..and on the page I saw there was more? I am off to inhale it...but am keeping this one on my way out..........

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

9 posted 2002-08-10 04:09 PM

or do you think
that in your ways,
simply placing your hands
on the parchment
will tell you everything
you need
to know?

Soliel...I was looking for this one last night when I replied to #2.
I finally found it and it was well worth the search....
You are an extraordinary poet, who is the mistress of understatement.

~ understated hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Brad_Smith
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

10 posted 2004-01-09 10:12 PM

for some reason this poem fills me with the urge to dive into deep water. simply succulent

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