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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 08-09-2002 09:21 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


you danced my eyes
as sky legged sin
with whispers you took
my virgin places
and decorated them soul soaked
with your mouth perfume

I was friend child born
and your womb sighed
that love owned more colors
than dark edges with eyes
or hands in gloves
and you would know it when

I sipped your pout words
and let them water my beard
you said I was pretty man hearted
when I wore your eye water
you wore dressless with shoes smile
and my face side was your amulet

we made valentines in august
with your pale shirt and buttons
you made me lap chair hungry
when you rocked on my toes
and kissed my mouth quiet
with slick candy fingers

when you were woman back walking
© dark

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Lady In White
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1 posted 08-09-2002 09:25 AM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady In White


I hear the sighing now...
Friday morning memories
anew
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2 posted 08-09-2002 09:37 AM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

Yegods, but that was lovely! As always, I stand in awe before your pen, Sir.


I married a cage dancer once, but she was more woman back talking!


~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 08-09-2002 09:38 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms whyte, you bring pleasure to my eyes
with your replies.
sir wranx, am humbled by your review sire, thanks to you.
Martie
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4 posted 08-09-2002 10:03 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

DS

Sometimes walking backwards makes beautiful poetry....reflecting words like this.
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5 posted 08-09-2002 10:32 AM       View Profile for WhiteRose   Email WhiteRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhiteRose

Simply devine.

There are a million messages,
in a million bottles,
you just have to know
which one to pull out of the ocean.

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 08-09-2002 10:49 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms martie, thanks lil neighbor, yes coming back or walking backwards is a return to what was before..with comfort.


ms rose, thanks to you so much for your soft touch whispers.
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7 posted 08-09-2002 10:56 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Oh yes...remarkable write...
a 'sigh' just waiting to happen here Dark.
~slow morning hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 08-09-2002 11:04 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms E...you just bring that sigh over and let me hug it out of you....thanks babe for your sweet reads.
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I was friend child born
and your womb sighed
that love owned more colors
than dark edges with eyes
or hands in gloves
and you would know it when


So meaningful...I can't begin to touch on the delicate images marked by strong emotion and sincerity. This really hits me in the most innocent way D. Yet everything woven within is purely you..purely seductive.. Hug you hard and keep you.

Sincerely,
Reg

[This message has been edited by rwood (08-09-2002 02:12 PM).]

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10 posted 08-09-2002 02:23 PM       View Profile for Indigo   Email Indigo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Indigo

when lace-edged silence
gatheres in your good fortune
with sky-legged strides


Indigo
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regina
keep me babe, and the thoughts you feel now,
freeze this moment as I will, in my cherish mountain secret place. thanks to you.
indigo
when the sky is legs
running to mountain dance
my eyes wear smile fortunes

thanks lady friend for your mind sides.

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-09-2002 02:27 PM).]

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12 posted 08-09-2002 07:05 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel

"we made valentines in august
with your pale shirt and buttons
you made me lap chair hungry
when you rocked on my toes
and kissed my mouth quiet
with slick candy fingers"




(smiles) Awwwwwww, if there is Christmas In July there is no reason why not to have Valentines in August too, I LOVE IT!!! (big huggsssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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13 posted 08-09-2002 07:08 PM       View Profile for Goodknight   Email Goodknight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Goodknight

DS - another wonderful write - I enjoyed the trip here - great poetry - Paul
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how did I miss these ones written long ago?
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