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First kiss (a duet with WhileIWasGone)
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First kiss (a duet with WhileIWasGone) |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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First Kiss (A wranx/WhileIWasGone Co-Production) Approach allured By heart sparked crave Lips meet A tentative touch A mere brush Of blush To blush Lips met, linger on A press of promise Provokes shy parting To delve delicate Wetly, Wetly Desire arrives Seeping salacious Licentious kisses Coax and woo Flesh to blush Trembling limbs Passion pursue Twining to illicit Lover's elicit knot Desire's golden Amber liquid Breaths co-mingle Two hearts seduced Slowly, bourn A new love is born Gently, Gently Passion and Desire Whisper of Love's precious gift Actually, WIWG should get top billing, But I do know how to ride a coat tail. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
you are both WONDERFUL!! This is SO lovely!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*karenity sighs* this reads like a matched set.  sweet... (I wish I could just stop my lips from saying "more", but...hey? miracles can wait.)  |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very true descriptions!  ~Beth You look inside my wild mind |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Bravo  This is a wonderful duet and full of yummy imagery  ...I enjoyed this very much aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
muy coolo you two it is a soul rush to see memory cakes made first kiss stuff is primo |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
May I say you wrote the coattails very well... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thanks to all for the wonderful comments. I was most pleased that DeaDi agreed to a duet (after much pleading, cajoling, begging and supplication on my part) It was a pleasure to work with such a talented crafter of verse. Thanks DeaDi! ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
liked it arthur |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Can it be? Two of my favorite poets, writing together? Is this real? Is this happening? Is it? Is it? Holy... |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
wranx your so silly and sweet.... and a great poet. Smooches DeaDiAmore [This message has been edited by WhileIWasGone (08-09-2002 08:49 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, you two make such fine magic together in words, this is beautifully passionate, ooohhhhhh...I LOVE IT!!! This is a labor of love, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet friends, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...PURE MAGIC!!... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you two do write magic - very sensual - full of wonderful feelings - loved it - Paul |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
Bravo! you two must do more of this. the styles dance slow and close to the murmuring cello BS I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Forgive me for asking  but just how much supplication, actually? |
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misery_made_beautiful Junior Member
since 2002-08-10
Posts 36 |
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! "Aging keeps life interesting" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well, you rode the coat tail...very very well.....great job to the both of you... |
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