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Walk with me
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Walk with me |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars 
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Come walk with me upon this road, I'll journey on with you I promise that I will not leave, and that we'll make it through You're headed down the wrong path, so come and walk with me Let's try to go a different way and with you I will be. You made a wrong turn somewhere and you tried to make it right But by yourself you couldn't, though you tried both day and night. Everybody makes mistakes, it happens all the time. But if we try our best to fix them, we can make things just fine. The road is long and hard, but you don't need to walk alone I will go along with you until the time it's done. It's more bearable with someone, and things are more fun with two. So let us start out now and I will walk the road with you. Always, Beth 8-8-02 You look inside my wild mind |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beth, by extending a hand, even to one who makes mistakes, you have given the gift of forgiveness... Something to learn from... |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
the gift of offering a hand to those who need it, normally this comes from someone who has been down the same pathway what a joy this was to read, loved it Sammie |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
It's a lovely offer, Beth. I hope he take it. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, this is such a beautiful invitation, sweet friend, may you always walk the roads of life with your sweetheart, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Beth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-09-2002 08:56 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a wonderful poem - well writtten - lots of deep thought evoked - loved it - paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Beth, Very nice write and read, enjoyed. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That's something to keep in mind, Sunshine. Thank you for reading. Thanks Sammie, I know what it is to make a mistake, most definitely! Thanks Sandra, I hope he does too! I have no idea what the future holds, Noah, but I hope it's something like you wished for me and him. Thank you. Thank you Paul, I'm glad you liked it! Seymour, I'm glad you liked it as well. Thanks! Once again thank you everyone for your responses to this!  ~Beth You look inside my wild mind |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I believe that I've written a similar piece. Probably many have. I like yours, very much. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Thank you wranx! I'm glad you liked it. You're right, a lot of people have probably written something along the lines of this. Thanks again! ~Beth You look inside my wild mind |
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