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When I'm Gone
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When I'm Gone |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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When I'm Gone When I never write again you shall not even know I am gone, not for long ~ no, and I am not wrong, you'll not know it, when I'm gone. When I never write again, can't imagine the where or when, but if it should happen, then, won't be for long ~ no, and I am never wrong... for I have a beautiful dream you see, of writing in calligraphy ~ for a scribe of God is what I'll be... and I am not wrong, you'll not know it when I am gone. For in your dreams I'll come to you and softly muse you with a song or two, leading your fantasies to sway away, to guide you in your dreams this day ~ no, you'll not know it when I am gone. If, for a moment, you seem alone seek the Sun then you shall see a brilliant little reminder of me, strong enough to melt the stone, yes, and I am not wrong… you'll not know it when I am gone. ~*~ 01.05.01 revised 08.08.02 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
If, for a moment, you seem alone seek the Sun then you shall see a brilliant little reminder of me, strong enough to melt the stone, yes, and I am not wrong… you'll not know it when I am gone. ~*~ -------------------------------------- How very very true sweet poetess... You aren't going anywhere for a very long time.. But even now when I look toward the sun... I think of you... Beautiful write Sunshine! ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If ever you were away simply not here I say I think I would know and that I think is so...... Beautiful poem of your past...still showing such depth...of your remarkable talent... Our sun shall always shine, even on a cloudy day... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I would know when you are gone, For days would darken ... light withdrawn ... Scribe you will, 'tward destiny, But stay here dear, sweet Karilea.  This is a  and so are you. When I saw the title, I said out loud ... "nope ... we're not ever letting you go!"  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I would know... I would so!!! So don't go..  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Karilea, this is a powerfully emotional write, sweet friend, I love it, this is a powerful message of eternal friendship and remembrance amongst kindred spirits! (sigh) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Please don't take my Sunshine away! I would know too, unless I go before you... This was so lovely! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes that is a beautiful dream Sunshine that shall come in its time...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Your future position is perfect for you. And I shall enjoy your words here in the meantime. Sandra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This made me cry. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hey sunsine..you aren't allowed to go anywhere...gotta have a note from god first.. cool stuff ms |
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