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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-08 08:37 PM



Rainy Days


rainy days
we lay
together on
our backs
as we
count cracks
of white
ceiling tiles
we laugh
at things
that brought
us together
by miles
how I
see you
bubble across
from me
it is
in these
rainy days
the best
of you
I see

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-08 08:41 PM


This is beautiful. I love to read your poems.
Bill Charles
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2 posted 2002-08-08 08:44 PM


helen - gentley gorgeous...

BC

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3 posted 2002-08-08 08:54 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh Helen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, I think love can always perspire, even on the rainiest days! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-08-08 09:29 PM


isn't it the simplest of pleasures that elicits the strongest memories
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