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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2002-08-08 07:58 PM

A Tease of Jest
~~~
A doggerel ...
bandage over bone
sends laughter
ousting
heartsick
Stretching strings
to alter tones
Intentions ...
analgesic
~
A temporary
tease of jest ...
a sanity
controller
A stitch of rhyme
ingested
vest ...
a vanity
consoler
~~~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-08-08 07:59 PM

Jest me...
reading...
smiling...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-08 08:01 PM

BRAVO!!! Wow, I love this sweet friend, this really hammers down to the funny bone and expresses the fight and balance between sanity and insanity! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Rex, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-08-08 08:09 PM

Hi Rex...
*smiling here*
Very interesting and well done!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-08-09 11:51 AM

Rex darling boy, this is simply perfect, you know that of course, and this from you is such a special treat. The format suits this perfectly, and the message is utterly utterly right on the money. Do I love this YOU have to know I do? YOU are an amazing writer darling boy utterly utterly amazing. I love it

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2002-08-09 12:09 PM

See, Saw, Marjory dor,
balance is the key and you seem to have found the way od balance.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-08-10 04:24 PM

I love the rhythm of this one, Rex...
Very good

~ chipmunky hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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