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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-08 07:51 PM




Inspired


inspired in
the smell
of hot
summer rain
you are
the ache
I can’t
get use to
tastes photograph
that makes
you full
but unable
to get
enough of
caught up
in passions
flood heating
my desire
then cooled
in the
whisper of
your shade

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-08-08 08:11 PM


evocative of the physical and emotional...tropical passion, and the comfort of release/retreat. You write so wispy...like angelhair.

but I guess y'KNEW I could relate to this, huh? *chuckle* (I have already had enough of AUGUST )

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2002-08-08 08:52 PM


helen - words only you can write, lovely...

BC

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
3 posted 2002-08-08 08:58 PM


Beautiful! We have been getting alot of summer rain, here.
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-08-08 08:59 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh Helen, I think it is amazing how so many things in life can remind us of love, the sun, the wind, the flame, the moon, all inspirations and entities! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krishankins
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5 posted 2002-08-08 09:28 PM


my heart races with every line

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-08-09 11:42 AM


cool shade of whisper
needs no less after passion
a grand finale

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