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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-08-08 01:33 PM


Memories Whisper

Soft brilliance of blue is the sky today
sweet are the memories blowing my way.
Fond thoughts leave me with a smile on my face
remains of cherish in hearts special place.

Warm breezes blow gentle upon my skin
my mind drifting away to days of when,
the best things in life were those that were free
the song of a bird, wind whispers in trees.

Gods little things, so easily given
making each day simply more worth living.
The scent of lilacs soft upon the air
wisping breeze gently blowing through my hair.

Memories whisper, serene the release
thankful of life, gracious moments of peace.


(c) dmsmith 08-08-02


Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-08-2002 01:42 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-08-08 01:37 PM


"Gods little things, so easily given
making each day simply more worth living.
The scent of lilacs soft upon the air
wisping breeze gently blowing through my hair"




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love how your words always reflect the goodness of the lord and of all optimistic and lovely things in life, sweet friend, you truly are our Gentle Spirit that comforts us all with your wisdom and love! (big hugggsssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-08-08 02:05 PM


very soft and gentle and loving words..a very enjoyable and uplifting poem! thanks for sharing this sweet sonnet
Cher

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Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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3 posted 2002-08-08 04:47 PM


Peacefully written and brought me a smile.  Thank you!
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4 posted 2002-08-08 07:31 PM


Donna,  a beautiful piece....so tranquil
and peaceful...enjoyed...

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5 posted 2002-08-08 08:13 PM


How lovely, Donna. Memories are so dear to me.
Sandra

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