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D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-08-08 12:34 PM

In the rain drops of a new day
The freshness of rejuvenation
Wakes up the renewal of purpose
That exhilarates the birds to sing
In the joy that sends butterflies to dancing
Over the sweet nectar whose flagrance
Triggers magic to blossom in flowers
In all the color of rainbows
In such variation of hues that the mind
Jumps in a burst of creative frenzy

My love, I create this garden of delight
In the love that lies in this heart
To fly in the winds of a special delivery
That sets fire to the burning needs I feel for you
To brush your delicate skin in a caress of tenderness
Letting the wildness of your eyes infatuate mine
As the breeze of our relationship
Intermingles in whispers of hypnotic trances
That says simply “I love you”

Let us create a masterpiece among us
That reinvents a new arrangement in words
That defines a romantic relationship
With such independent feelings
That we share ourselves willingly
In the arousals that explode in the fireworks
At every level of our emotions

Yes my love, let the heavens open up
In the moisture of your lips
Entering mine
Creating the nectar
In the fragrance of you needing me
Letting my heart dance
In the buttery sweetness
Of my hunger for you
To ravish you in treasures
That this mind needs you more every day

Baby my independence
Is in your hands
For “I love you so”

I will not be posting as much as normal to see the complete set of poems email me to get on a distribution list. If enough requests are made from this list, I will then post that poem here. To get on this list email me at davelyoung1@hotmail.com. Thanks and blessings from a dreamer that hope to make a difference to a reader someday.

I write so much that I do not want to overburden a site with too many of my writings. Your writing is important as mine so it should also have its space.

D.Lester Young (08/08/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-08-08 12:46 PM

Well done. Good luck in your future promising artistry. ThisDiamond

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-08-12 01:56 AM

Like this...James

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2002-08-12 09:38 AM

Let us create a masterpiece among us
That reinvents a new arrangement in words

A master of words. I enjoyed the read.

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

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