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. . . inner fire . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
let me search your heart I will kindle fires within dissipating gloom Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is SO good seeing you back in the blue [pages]... these are  promises... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A capsule of liquid gold. Greetings and bravo. ThisDiamond |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
Interlopoer, I really like good ones(what are these called?)and this is a very good one. It's a beautiful thought too, well done. Jason [This message has been edited by Jason (08-08-2002 12:45 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
sunshine breaks the clouds every time love comes to town an angels picnic "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine ~ Gee, thanks, shiney one  ThisDiamond ~ I think your first time to visit my work. Thanks for your time and wonderful reply Jason ~ I think your first time, too. This form is called a Senryu. Probably "American" Senryu. Thanks for the 1derful comment Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Noah ~ I almost missed you. What a fine reply, my friend. Thank you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the way you can write such deep thoughts with so few words, Interloper... I think that is a sign of genius  ~ lots of chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling heart I hope the tall Texan realises that he is the best Texan poet around. Well if you don’t you should doThe way you spin words into wonder is always perfect and sometimes on days when the day seems particularly drab you are a positive shower of light and magic. Wonderful writing. It flows beautifully across the page like a sweep of rainbow hue. And again you fly my mind into a place where dreams are sprinkled with starlight and moonlight is reflected back inside dreamer’s song YOU of course KNOW I adore this don’t you, or do I have to tell you so? Okay if I must I must I love it utterly utterly. This is utterly utterly perfect   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
darkness can not hide inspiration of passion when you say my name |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lyra ~ Not all signs are correct I think I've found a way to counterfeit at least one Your kind approbation is humbling. Marvelous one ~ You seem intent on my never being able to wear a Stetson or Resistol again Helen ~ Helen, Helen, Helen Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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