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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-08 10:36 AM



I've seen slumbering reflections
in the spring as it rests.
The water still for a moment
all images frozen in time
sharpley glistening
in the afternoon glare.
A gentle repose of life
captured in an instant
as the running water rests,
saves the picture
then continues on.

WhiteRose


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1 posted 2002-08-08 10:46 AM


fascinating

this held my mind frozen, for a moment, trying to capture the essence of this mesmerizing thought of a spring pausing for a moment in time

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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2 posted 2002-08-08 01:27 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is wonderful, I imagined a flowing stream and the sweet solitude of a girl sitting beside it, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-08-09 10:43 AM


This is fabulous!
Write on, please!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2002-08-09 11:07 AM


oh yes..you wrap it and unwrap it
in the same sitting, enjoyed it ms

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5 posted 2002-08-09 01:32 PM


WhiteRose~
I do like this ... sort of what I call my Thought-O-Graphs ... poetic lens captures~
Might be time for me to develop some of those again~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Blue Kitty
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6 posted 2002-08-09 02:00 PM


Saves a picture, then moves on, Oh this is a beautiful phrase.  Sort of like a moment in life that stays with you, sometimes even when you don’t want it to.  I liked this bunches.

P.

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7 posted 2002-08-09 02:40 PM


Great imagery! Loved the softness of this poem.

Deb

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