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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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A Ramble of sorts~ ~~~~~ {whatever fire touches changes forever} from darker waters -- within unhealed hearts of what I love since learning, I dream in color different angels at my door one by one they tumble into a deeper grace resting in beauty and creation {perhaps it is time that matters} tender moments when I stopped trying to determine how each line would unfold but-- how each line felt dancing through veins like hungry roses -- until petals fell softly, blending in earth colors where rivers and sapphire winds are woven with distillate rain along silk roads-- and whispers fall upon curves of the moon -- figures between notes bleeding in naked tunes of harmony soft yield of silence among mountains there are flames standing at the window looking far south-- smoke flowers in fields of orchids -- {time can wear the soul down to} outlines of waves, patterns of green {perhaps it is time } waiting to be stirred The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (08-08-2002 12:15 AM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
until petals fell softly, blending in earth colors where rivers and sapphire winds are woven with distillate rain along silk roads-- and whispers fall upon curves of the moon This is so dreamily and softly beautiful, Lauren... and I just love your imagery...  ~ lots of loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"tender moments when I stopped trying to determine how each line would unfold but-- how each line felt dancing through veins like hungry roses -- until petals fell softly, blending in earth colors where rivers and sapphire winds are woven with distillate rain along silk roads--"   (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love how you blend all the colors in your gorgeous words, sweet friend, this is beautiful, may the wind always vibrate the earths essence all around you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
tender moments when I stopped trying to determine how each line would unfold but-- how each line felt dancing through veins like hungry roses -- Lauren, every word that you write is one you have felt, and in turn you have allowed us to feel it with you. Always lady......beautiful... Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful imagery and beautiful phrasing Lauren ... very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ I 'knew' from the title that this one would be a jewel~ 'among mountains there are flames standing at the window looking far south-- smoke flowers in fields of orchids --' It is ....~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love how you write with such depth...... "when I stopped trying to determine how each line would unfold but-- how each line felt dancing through veins like hungry roses -- until petals fell softly, blending in earth colors where rivers and sapphire winds are woven with distillate rain along silk roads-- and whispers fall upon curves of the moon" -- God you're a poetic peach! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, A most lovely weave of delicate lines, enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
... tender moments when I stopped trying to determine how each line would unfold but-- how each line felt dancing through veins like hungry roses ... ramble away any time, my dear, as you do it so very well.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
stir until well mixed. . . serve in glass bowls. . . hmmmmm. . . an interesting taste indeed. . . love it. . . but, of course, you knew that already. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lauren Your poetry is like a lovely clear vase filled with water in which color is added and swirled. Beautiful! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"how each line felt" Ahhhh...exactly, my poet friend. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - your words place me in a trance... BC |
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JAR Junior Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 34 |
LittleL' tender moments when I stopped trying to determine how each line would unfold but-- how each line felt dancing through veins like hungry roses I am not sure how to reply to this it is very tender I think, as you are J' |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Amazing! I see you have only gotten better in time, but this was absolutely as amazing as anything you write today. A joy to read. |
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