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Greeneyes
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0 posted 08-08-2002 12:13 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes

A Ramble of sorts~

~~~~~


{whatever fire touches  changes forever}

from   darker waters --
within   unhealed   hearts

of what I love since learning,
     I dream in color  
different angels at my door
one by one they tumble
into a  deeper grace   resting in
beauty and creation

{perhaps it is time that matters}

       tender moments
when I stopped   trying to determine
how each line would unfold but--
how each line felt
dancing through    veins
like hungry roses
--
      until    petals
fell softly,     blending
in earth colors    where rivers
and sapphire winds    are woven with
   distillate   rain
along silk roads--

and whispers  fall
upon curves of the moon
--
    figures between
notes   bleeding  in
naked tunes  of harmony
   soft yield of silence

among   mountains
there are flames
standing    at the window
looking far south--
smoke flowers in fields
of orchids --
        {time can wear the soul down to}

outlines of    waves,
patterns of green  


{perhaps it is time }

waiting

to be stirred


The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy



[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (08-08-2002 12:15 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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until    petals
fell softly,     blending
in earth colors    where rivers
and sapphire winds    are woven with
   distillate   rain
along silk roads--

and whispers  fall
upon curves of the moon

This is so dreamily and softly beautiful, Lauren...
and I just love your imagery...
~ lots of loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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"tender moments
when I stopped   trying to determine
how each line would unfold but--
how each line felt
dancing through    veins
like hungry roses
--
      until    petals
fell softly,     blending
in earth colors    where rivers
and sapphire winds    are woven with
   distillate   rain
along silk roads--"




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love how you blend all the colors in your gorgeous words, sweet friend, this is beautiful, may the wind always vibrate the earths essence all around you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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       tender moments
when I stopped   trying to determine
how each line would unfold but--
how each line felt
dancing through    veins
like hungry roses
--

Lauren, every word that you write is one you have felt, and in turn you have allowed us to feel it with you.  Always lady......beautiful...

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

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Wonderful imagery and beautiful phrasing Lauren ... very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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GreenEyes~
I 'knew' from the title that this one would be a jewel~

'among   mountains
there are flames
standing    at the window
looking far south--
smoke flowers in fields
of orchids --'


It is ....~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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I love how you write with such depth......

"when I stopped   trying to determine
how each line would unfold but--
how each line felt
dancing through    veins
like hungry roses
--
      until    petals
fell softly,     blending
in earth colors    where rivers
and sapphire winds    are woven with
   distillate   rain
along silk roads--

and whispers  fall
upon curves of the moon"
--

God you're a poetic peach!
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Lauren,
A most lovely weave of delicate lines, enjoyed.
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...

       tender moments
when I stopped   trying to determine
how each line would unfold but--
how each line felt
dancing through    veins
like hungry roses
...

ramble away any time,
my dear, as you do it so very well....
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enjoyed
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stir until well mixed. . . serve in glass bowls. . .

hmmmmm. . . an interesting taste indeed. . .

love it. . . but, of course, you knew that already. . .

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Lauren

Your poetry is like a lovely clear vase filled with water in which color is added and swirled.  Beautiful!
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"how each line felt"

Ahhhh...exactly, my poet friend.
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Greeneyes - your words place me in a trance...

BC
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LittleL'

tender moments
when I stopped trying to determine
how each line would unfold but--
how each line felt
dancing through veins
like hungry roses


I am not sure how
to reply to this
it is very tender
I think, as you are
J'

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Amazing!  I see you have only gotten better in time, but this was absolutely as amazing as anything you write today.  A joy to read.
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