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WhileIWasGone
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0 posted 2002-08-07 05:51 PM



In the Heart of G-d


In all of creation
I've never seen anything as beautiful
as the smile upon your lips
Or the twinkle within your eyes


I've seen Twilight softly kissing
the Summer's horizon
and Aurora painting upon
the canvas of Autumn
using the colors of everlasting Love


There were times that I've seen
the Moon so silver it seemed
as if Winter had stopped by
for a brief visit
leaving Luna shining brilliantly
with a sweet kiss good bye


And there were times that I've seen
the Ocean dressed in the kind of blue
that is so purely beautiful
it leaves a sweet stain on my eyes
And when I look at you
I see you dressed in that kind of blue
that kind of heavenly blue that only I
can see with my Sapphire colored eyes


Sometimes there are nights in which
I stay up late looking up at the universe
trying to find your smile
and see the twinkle in your eyes
Only to find falling stars
from the eyes of our Creator
And I see my love for you there
engraved in the heart of G-d


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1 posted 2002-08-07 06:03 PM


A very sweet poem, even with the God to G-d change -- which sort of gives it a nasty kicker of an ending. In other words, more amazing work from you, DDA. I believe in god, and I don't think the spelling of his/her/its/their name matters much.

You brave woman. Heh heh.

Mikey

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2 posted 2002-08-07 09:06 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, such love always fills your words, may this happiness always be with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-08-08 11:01 AM



A beautiful poem,
created by a beautiful lady...

WhileIWasGone
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4 posted 2002-08-08 12:12 PM


Thank you for the kind replies.

DeaDiAmore

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