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. . . Finding you . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
how I long to stroll among the hidden treasures the forbidden vault the deepest core of your heart I will find you there Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (08-07-2002 12:44 PM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ahhhhhhh to have that depth of interest in another is a wondrous beginning to a real relationship, surely it is! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I like this. A simple, yet loving thought. Love Seduces Joy From The Heart |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's so good to see you writing again, Interloper...we have been missing your musings... you have a way of zeroing in to the heart... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! Nobody does it better...nobody!!  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
That is where all things meaningful lie in wait..in refinery.. Sincerely, Reg |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling heart this bears the Bob mark of superior quality, you wander through my mind making yourself known to the traces of me that you encounter. And if somewhere in the silence of the moons soft sigh you hear my reply I find you answer with just the right words. Do I love this? You KNOW the answer to that darling man don’t you………… it is of course I love it utterly. It is so good to see you in here darling heart, this is very much your home as is the labyrinthine ways within my soul, but that is beside the point. Truly exquisite writing I love it utterly utterly utterly. NO ONE does it like you, so don’t stop what ever you do. Goodness that is a beautiful piece from you, and don’t reply goodness has nothing to do with it, because that is my line  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Virginia ~ You are, of course, absolutely correct White Rose ~ Thank you for the wonderful comment. Sunshine ~ I've missed being here. Thanx Nancy Lee ~ Aw shux, ma'am. My Stetson is never gonna fit, now Regina ~ Beautifully and truthfully said. Thanx. Vandana ~ I'm glad. Marsha ~ The Tall Texan scuffs his boots in the dirt (and stuff) and cannot find the words to give a proper reply, except to say "Thank you Marvelous one." Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ I find this ... ummmmm, well ... exquisite doesn't quite fit ... yet it is ! marvelous ? ... doesn't cover it~ superb ? ... could be~ How's about I compromise .... and just let you know that I plain downright LIKE it~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Wow, how did I miss this, this is beautiful! You truly are the master of senryus and tankas, sweet friend, this is another tiny gem of praise, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
how I long to stroll among the hidden treasures the forbidden vault the deepest core of your heart I will find you there drifting through the night each dream a face of the dark a touch of tender a need to surrender mine together in heart M |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Marge ~ If you like it, it has passed the supreme test Moah ~ Thank you, Oh GR8 Cheerleader Maureen ~ WOW! I hope you post that. It is 1derful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Becoming moonlight together in shadowed stroll fingers intertwine where earth meets up with heaven and the morning holds back dawn |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Interloper, I am glad to see you back in this 'safe' environment, you belong here along with all the other treasures and I'm glad you see you are unlocking the wisdom of the ages for us. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful thoughts, Interloper. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
how I long to stroll among the hidden treasures the forbidden vault the deepest core of your heart I will find you there and you will, Interloper... just relax and enjoy the stroll as I enjoy your writing. ~ hugs from the forbidden coreLyra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SN ~ I can't spel in French (or English either )That Tanka just melted my heart... Please post it and share with all. Keth ~ Hey, kiddo Thanks for the welcome back Martie ~ Thank you, ma'am James ~ I appreciate it Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Perfectly said Sandra |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Bob hi there this is a really excellent poem as mum is so fond of saying no one can hold a candle to you. YOU are simply the best at these love and warm stuff as always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sandra ~ Why thank you nurse of mine Krissy ~ You should always listen to your mum Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
given free and full no room for any other all my heart is yours |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I love this, what a sensually beautiful tanka! And, I'm keeping it~Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Very lovely Interloper~.....you say so much emotion, in so little verse.... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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mestesa78 Junior Member
since 2002-08-12
Posts 24 |
To travel into the depths of another will bring comfort to the soul. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Helen ~ That is beautiful. I hope you post it Melissa ~ I am honored that you would keep one of my works Lauren ~ Some say I have little to say Thanx for the 1derful comment. metesa78 ~ I think your first time to visit my work. welcome and thanx for the time you spent here. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (08-13-2002 09:02 AM).] |
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