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Paul Wilson
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0 posted 2002-08-07 02:18 AM


Golden Dreams
By Paul Wilson

Blankets of smoke and haze
Cover the countryside
As the sun sets the sky ablaze
Men on horseback quicken their stride

Off in the distance we see
To the west toward blue skies
A thousand more maybe three
We watch the dust clouds as they rise

Across rivers and streams
For days they did ride
In search of their dreams
Across the great divide

Men and women young and old
Driven by greed and desire
In search of riches untold
Over the mountains getting higher

Through snow and rain
Hunger and cold
They travel across the desert plain
Searching for this yellow gold

This journey has ended for many
Riches they will never achieve
No gold in their pockets, not even a penny
Now their wives and children grieve

More will come this way
They will outnumber the stars
No time for delay
On this land they will leave their scars

The rush is over all is gone
The battles have been fought
They will leave with the dawn
With their gold freedom will be bought
Or was it all for naught?



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1 posted 2002-08-07 06:31 AM


An absolutely outstanding write Paul....indeed...

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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2 posted 2002-08-07 07:15 AM


A wonderful journey of the old West with visions of a new life beyond the Great Divide ... very nicely captured Paul, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2002-08-14 08:58 PM


Donna... Thank you for your kind words.
Sorry for the late reply, Busy Busy.

Kit... Very thankful to you for taking the time to reply. The old West and hardships our ancestors had to face so that we could be where we are today has always interested
me. I guess we are blazing trails for the next generation. Thanks Again... Paul

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4 posted 2002-08-15 12:45 PM


A lovely tribute to our forebears, Paul...
I very much enjoyed.
~ hugs from a pioneeering chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-08-15 09:46 AM


Very nice write Paul. Enjoyed the tribute to our past.
Paul Wilson
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6 posted 2002-08-18 09:39 PM


Lyra... Sorry for the late " Thank You "
I an glad you enjoyed it...Paul

White Rose... Thanks for reading. Sorry for the late reply, I can't seem to catch up these days...Paul

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7 posted 2002-08-20 02:43 AM


I believe there is a reason for everything, no matter how senseless things seem at times. Good piece!
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