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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-08-07 12:55 PM





I wonder...who is this stranger?
come into the season of my unfolding
gently reaching for me
silently. firmly drawing me in

I 've traveled the contours of your body with velvet touch
I've known the smell and taste of you...
the language of love...
your defenses weakening in moments....
and sometimes with lovers embrace,
I might almost break through
But I choose not to.....
I desire so. to share
not to conquer...

The key to you remains with you.
Any door you open
I would gladly walk through.
As for myself
My locks are unlatched

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2002-08-07 08:57 AM


I might almost break through
But I choose not to.....
I desire so. to share
not to conquer...

The key to you remains with you.
Any door you open
I would gladly walk through.
As for myself
My locks are unlatched
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New journies are as such and you desribe it well.  I particularly like the above as it gives the real key to bringing us closer to where we hope to be in any relationship.  Once again...a true pleasure to read your words.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2002-08-07 09:48 AM


CSKpoet - unlocking the door, you say it well...

BC

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-08-07 10:35 AM


CSKpoet
I fully agree with Mark on this one. Nice write.

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
4 posted 2002-08-07 01:35 PM


This is a lovely poem. Enjoyed.

Love Seduces Joy From The Heart

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-08-07 08:51 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may love unlook all those doors to your sweetest dreams, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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6 posted 2002-08-07 08:54 PM


a very good poem - I enjoyed the read lots - Paul
CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise
7 posted 2002-08-08 01:39 AM


A big thanks to all who commented on my work..yep I do hate control and maipulation..therefore a new ewlationship needa to be free free free to express whatever and whenever ready..I was just letting him know I was quite open to him ..ball in his court...LOL ....
amiles. I am glad all enjoyed this one.
hugs to all, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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