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Meanings Defined
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Meanings Defined |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Meanings Defined Breaking away, from those ties that bind. Sighs of love trailing, to cover the mind. Lost dreams to return, overwhelming in feel. The tear of a memory, illusion or real? In words, want to coat you, to canvas desire. One wish becomes two and another plane higher. The simplest of words, need touch to retrace. Temptation as always, forever in place. In my heart is a longing, until next we meet. Each hour of morning is never complete, lest my eyes find you rambling in shadows of gloom, as I join all in word play, poetry in bloom. Soft echoes of love, I meter in rhyme, limited only, by meanings, define. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Oh Maureen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope love can find its way into your heart always and show you how meaningful it is to be forever! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart YOU are the most talented and consistently writer of excellence that I know. The way you caress and bend a word to fit your flow is incredible. YOU have to know I utterly utterly utterly love this. Perfect meter, truly exquisite flow, this is without doubt one of your utter best. See what painting has done for you? if you hadn’t done it you wouldn’t have had to sit down between coats. I love it but you know that, its perfect you know that too, so I’ll simply say this is terrific.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Your cadence is always such a delight to read Maureen ... loved your thoughts in this piece. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Another fine piece of art here...I loved the way it ebbed and flowed...excellent! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
A true work of art which I will try to learn from... Paul Right now the only meter I know is the parking meter along the street |
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