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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England 
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darting in and out of night, where mountains vigil pastures new- and haze dissolves from dark to light; eyes joined to sky I cannot blink animated doorways shrink: ¤ With key in lock, I throw my stake vibrating rust one click and in, but which opening must I take? direction lost, but I begin to slice the mask from threadbare dreams nothing here is what it seems: ¤ Each step I take is one more leap giant jumps in puddles clean, the water pulls my troubles deep I’m losing track of what I’ve seen; four corners swell, pulsating sting no antidote your kisses bring: ¤ Poison seeps and peels the pain shed my skin, stand naked, being I gasp to find I breathe again and fall within the sun, all seeing; Rainbows soak my veins anew days patterned shade, spins greyish blue: S-G-K© |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Samantha I tried to pick the one I liked best but could not. They are all excellent. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Aching, sensuous work you're posting here, SKG. I am glad for it. Mike "I fall into your arms." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I mean SGK.  Sorry, a bit tired."I fall into your arms." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sammie - the way you open up in your writings is just amazing... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Oh Samn, this is soooooo beautifully haunting, sweet sister butterfly, this is wonderful, I am so happy you are spreading your colors here too, this is enchanting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Sam, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Hope here. Discerning clearly the answers we seek sends us round......to us. The antidote to the haze, it's darker shades, soften in the catharsis of our pain and is often the cruel poison which frees us to start from scratch. Enjoyed and needed. Richard |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sammie, your work over the past year has become exceptional, well crafted with much meaning within... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Samantha~ This is quite, quite lovely~ I think captivating is the word I'm looking for~ 'I gasp to find I breathe again and fall within the sun, all seeing' Yes ... captivating, indeed~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Sammie....this is just SO good! Wonderful feelings penned here. Exceptional write. ~Hugs~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sammie! Love your postings here, Don't stop! ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
thank you sincerely, for taking the time to read...me you are all great Sammie ^i^ |
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