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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-08-06 04:31 PM



I like it sweet and creamy
I like it cold and hard
I like to eat it at night
sitting out in my backyard.
I love it on ice-cream
on cake, and cookies too
why I'd put it on most anything
and yes, most often do.
But alas this ode is sad
for Dr. Atkins says it's bad.
So I've learned to live without it
but darn I wish I had,
just a little hersheys kiss
I mean what could it hurt?
Just a little kiss
almost like a chocolate flirt.
To tease my mouth with flavor,
to tickle me a bit.
Then alas to eat no more
to stay this trim and fit.

WhiteRose
(craving chocolate)

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-06-2002 04:33 PM).]

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skyshine
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1 posted 2002-08-06 04:43 PM


Mmm chocolate You're a chocolate fiend too? Liked the poem! *runs off to go find some chocolate* LOL!

~Beth

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

paladin
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2 posted 2002-08-06 04:43 PM


I believe the first temptaion was not an apple.It was a box of Godiva chocolates hanging from the tree of life.

paladin

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3 posted 2002-08-08 09:59 AM


ROFL... and I agree with paladin! LOL

This is delightful, Rosie... *S*

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-08-08 02:19 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, I'm in love with chocolate, it is soooooo yummy, I could never get enough of it, besides in the most part studies say it is good for you, calories is the only bummer but otherwise it is good for the self-esteem and helps you live longer possibly! (kiss on cheek) This is delicious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2002-08-08 05:44 PM


WhiteRose - I loves dat chocolate, yes indeed I do. Can eat it in the morning, afternoon, at night, and even at two. But please don't tell I loves dat chocolate dat much...

BC

NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2002-08-08 07:25 PM


Oh, this is just to die for! Yum, Yum, Yum!

How I am craving a huge hunk of white chocolate right now.

Drooling....Marti

catalinamoon
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7 posted 2002-08-08 08:03 PM


HAHA, I love this. I just did a diet poem, too.
Go ahead and have some chocolate
Sandrra

CSKpoet
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8 posted 2002-08-09 02:09 AM


oooooooooooo yummmy poem! I must go in search of a fix now ...
to ya ,
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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