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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2002-08-06 04:19 PM

Peaches & Crème …shared
~*~
On a warm summer afternoon,
she picked golden peaches,
softly squeezing with delight,
anticipating warm pie
on his lips tonight.
She placed the hot pie
on the ledge of her windowsill,
so the gentle breeze
would carry the sweet aroma
high in the hills.
She leisurely bathed
in water perfumed
with orange blossom’s
and honeysuckle blooms,
then dressed in her finest
flowing white chiffon
and hungrily waited
to share her golden peach pie.
As the moon slid into place
and the evening dew fell,
with a rose to her lips
and a gentle swing to her hips,
she answered
the eager knock on her door.
Darling…
peaches and crème?

BloomingRose

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (08-06-2002 04:21 PM).]

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2002-08-06 04:33 PM

oh my. . . there's much here. . .

yes. . . a lot of warmth indeed. . . great job. . .

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-08-06 05:22 PM

What man could ever resist this offer...

Beautifully written and such a joy to read.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-08-06 05:26 PM

ah Deb, bet he couldn't resist such a wonderfully peachy suprise!! Well done. *s*

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

4 posted 2002-08-06 07:27 PM

Thanks so much!

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2002-08-06 09:37 PM

Now that gives a whole new meaning to the word dessert. Wonderfully soft is this verse that you bring to us tonight and subtle are the rhymes that add that little accent in just the right places. Sort of like pinching the edges of a pie crust to get exactly 8 pinches per slice in perfect proportion. Well done........I like when you write longer verses. You bring some very wonderful images about you string your thoughts long.

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

6 posted 2002-08-06 11:01 PM

Soft, sweet and seductive those peaches are indeed! Very romantic write Deb...lovely! *S*

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-08-06 11:48 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, mmmmmmmm...I love peaches and cream too, this is a yummy poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

8 posted 2002-08-06 11:52 PM

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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