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Jason
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0 posted 2002-08-06 12:34 PM



I look out to sea
the clouds flowing in
a majestic dance
to the beat of thunder
as it echoes across
the fluid grace
of the ocean's surface
swirling to the rhythm
of a timeless symphony
the thunder changes the tempo
and the winds increase their speed
as the tempest turns the sea
in a frenzied waltz
as the passions and motions
of the sea-storm increase
changing the waves gentle touch
into a harsh scratch
digging into the beach
like nails in a lovers back

Then the salted winds of time
that bring the spicy scent of the sea
mix with the ozone of the storm
move me through an age, long gone
while the brilliant blue
flashes of lightning
illuminates my face eerily
in the grey gloom of the cloudy day
but only for an instant
before fading away
as another takes it's place
my eyes reflect the grey clouds
broken by flashes of blue
like the lightning in the skies
telling of the chaos within
for I am akin to the storm
and wedded to the sea
now standing upon the shore
watching this dance
of my heart and soul
and I find peace
in the Sea Storm.

Jason Daniels

Practiced in the Art of Perception

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-08-06 12:41 PM


This is actually majestic in it's description. Bravo!

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2 posted 2002-08-06 03:02 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Jason, this nisn wonderful, sweet friend, I too could always smell the salt of the sea reading this, this is fabulous, I love it, we all love you so much! Youn have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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