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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-06 11:24 AM



My pieces aren't the same
as the other players
they are all too old
not loyal, but betrayers.

They stay in the game
long after they've lost
as if they don't care
what it might cost.

The strongholds are weak
the road to candyland
is flooded and decayed
and I've a losing hand.

Sorry is a good one
yet when I play the game
I've not heard these words
as if there's no shame.

I've lost the game of life
for I chose the wrong board
all the new frontiers
had already been explored.

Time to drop the dice
all the newness is gone
that's it for me
in this game I'm done.

WhiteRose

Love Seduces Joy From The Heart

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
1 posted 2002-08-06 11:39 AM


This is really clever, Anne...
You are so good at words, maybe you should try scattergories or scrabble....
You would certainly be a winner there.
~ hugs from a nutty critter

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

paladin
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2 posted 2002-08-06 11:51 AM


Every time I think I understand the game somebody changes the rules.

paladin

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Wandering
3 posted 2002-08-06 01:38 PM


This was a very easy and enjoyable read.

~Sky

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