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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-08-06 10:32 AM


“THROUGH MY EYES”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Wanted to write a poem,
of love and romance…
But my heart didn’t,
it was locked in a trance…

So I searched afar,
until I found someone…
Wanted to write about her,
if she had no objection…

Was caught by her charm,
loving, and serene…
A most beautiful woman,
sensuous, yet pristine…

Know she’ll be warm,
my eyes tell me so…
I’d like to talk one day,
wonder if she will also…
~~~~


© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Interloper
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1 posted 2002-08-06 10:36 AM


I think you can count on it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

1slick_lady
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2 posted 2002-08-06 10:41 AM


well you won't know unless you ask her...ask her...(courage) nudge nudge
vandana
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3 posted 2002-08-06 10:43 AM


enjoy
VAS
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4 posted 2002-08-06 10:45 AM


echo, shall I, slicklady

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2002-08-06 10:46 AM


With a sweet invitation like this ... I think she will also, Bill. Nicely penned.

Best wishes,
/Kit

WhiteRose
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6 posted 2002-08-06 10:48 AM


I agree with all the others. She will also. Just noticed you changed your pic. Very nice.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-06-2002 10:49 AM).]

SmartChick
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7 posted 2002-08-06 10:52 AM


Bill, I think she will.
Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-08-06 11:09 AM


Now that you've found her, Bill...don't let her get away...
You absolutely must send her this beautiful, romantic write....
I like your new pic...
~ lots of chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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9 posted 2002-08-06 12:58 PM


Amazing what we can see when we look isn't it? I hope so too! Very nicely done Bill. *S*
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10 posted 2002-08-06 01:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, I know she will be happy to take your invitation! (big huggssssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kellie_Cantrell
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11 posted 2002-08-06 01:31 PM


--------------------------
Wanted to write a poem,
of love and romance…
But my heart didn’t,
it was locked in a trance
--------------------------

So many times I have felt like that. That poem just was too good!

**Please Check out some of my poetry, Thank You**

Krawdad
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12 posted 2002-08-06 01:41 PM


Very interesting things may happen, when you ask.  
Do it, Bill.
(And then tell us about it, of course.)

Mark Bohannan
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13 posted 2002-08-06 09:50 PM


I say ask her..........I can't wait to read the wonderful poem you share afterwards.   Very nice to read you again and of course your thoughts convey what alot of us go through in those moments of hesitation.  
1slick_lady
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14 posted 2002-08-07 07:36 AM


well...we are waiting......................................................................................
Bill Charles
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15 posted 2002-08-07 09:49 AM


H'mmmmmmmm....
Sven
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16 posted 2002-08-07 04:34 PM


just let the heart lead BC. . .and take your time. . .

great work my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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