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lifeslight
Junior Member
since 2002-08-06
Posts 15


0 posted 2002-08-06 06:03 AM


This one i wrote to my girl, shes gone for 2 weeks.

"Missing You"

Those late nights, and thos early mornings
forever we cuddled and forever we kissed.
As I fell under loves spell your eyes seduced my heart
now i cannot help but to say,
Im missing you...

The Angels voice, and heavens smile
and stationary glare into the oceans sunset
is when im missing you...

Our warmth as our united friendship
and the power of our restless love,
the dreams of being together
im missing you...

As the moon falls, and the sun rises, i glare softly east and think of your beutiful person
Is when I miss you the most...

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WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-08-06 09:20 AM


Missing someone we love is so very hard at times. That feeling of only being half there. I enjoyed this very much and could relate.

Love Seduces Joy From The Heart

Savage Quiescence
Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326
Wandering
2 posted 2002-08-06 01:41 PM


A very strong feeling of admiration and love in this, and a beautiful read it is.

~Sky

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