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Marge Tindal
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BenTickieLoodle

~*Marge Tindal*~

Oh, there she goes again
making senseless rhyme
Trying to commit
another poetic crime~

BenTickieLoodle
Me thinks me lost me noodle
So if you should find
that I've lost my silly mind
Just ignore this stage of me
for I'm sure that it will cease to be~

When the kitchen cabinet muses
crawl back into their space
I'll be left here with
the inevitable egg upon my face !

But ... just in case
it gives you a smile
to be loose with your verse
for just a little while
Then know that I am smiling too
saying BenTickieLoodle
right along with you~


*Trust me ....
Sliter, Twiter and Tambra are to blame for this one !


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com       

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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon


1 posted 08-05-2002 08:36 PM       View Profile for WhiteRose   Email WhiteRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhiteRose

This is adorable. It made me smile. Thank you.
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2 posted 08-05-2002 08:52 PM       View Profile for Suetang   Email Suetang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suetang

Loved this one Marge, it left me with a big smile.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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Somewhere in time~


3 posted 08-05-2002 09:23 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

*smiling at you Margie girl!*  
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On A Journey To The Unknown


4 posted 08-05-2002 09:32 PM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

That's ok! I love it when you make your senseless rhymes. It always gives me a smile.
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A Mountain Paradise


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What's wrong with the world today is not enough Marge giggles! Or is it Barry Manilow love songs?

Thanks for the rolling on the floor giggle. I loved this.

Git to the drs.  Hugs, Marti
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This is so cute Marge...
and here's some egg for your face
Thanks for sharing it with us.

~ annoying rodent hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"Gwendolyn Brooks

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Margie girl darling sister of my soul, your writing is always so wonderful and this is no exception it matters not that it is senseless rhyme it makes perfect poetical nonsense and it is delightful. Why does everything have to be so prim and uptight anyway, a bit of fun never is wasted. Wonderful darling heart I love it utterly

And I can just see you reciting this too, it suits you darling heart it suits you

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Marge Tindal
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*FriendsALL~
Yah ... sometimes it just pours out whether you want it to or not~

This is , of course, a great literary piece that I shall forever be remembered for~
DUH !
She's just got to get off those pain meds !
(Or take more of it !)

WhiteRose~ SueTang~ Enchantress~ SuzieQ~
Thankee all ... glad to give someone a smile~

SweetMarti~
I 'think' it was a hit tune by 'Perco and the Cets'

Lyra~
Now that is ADORABLE ... and soooooo perfect~

Thankee little ChipperMunk~

MarshaLove~
Ahhhhhh .... now you 'know' what you gals are in for at Tampa !!!  Beware ... Sliter, Twiter and Tambra have booked reservations too !!!

Have NO FEAR ... I can PROMISE I will NOT recite this for love or money !
(well ... maybe for $$$$$ !)
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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You just had to go and choose money, didn't you... knowing darn well we could supply PLENTY of love! LOL

ROFL @ those impish muses having reservations... I would have sworn they had none whatsoever! *tee hee*

So it takes pain meds to make them play?
I sure enjoyed them having their say. *G*
Marge Tindal
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SweetAmusingSuthernGal~
Now let's see ... who has the best pain meds !

'ROFL @ those impish muses having reservations... I would have sworn they had none whatsoever!'

I LOVE your mind !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com       

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Somewhere in time~


11 posted 05-13-2006 04:32 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

YES!!  I needed a laugh Marg!!!  
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