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bags123
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since 2002-06-06
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0 posted 2002-08-05 04:53 PM


Cruel,.. lay the waves,
out upon the stoney sheath.
Battering  with a cosmic force,
portending no
relief.

Cruel,.. drives the rain,
on the ships far out to sea.
Sailors dream of distant homes,
where lovers used
to be.

Cruel,.. are the storms,
which perplex the human heart.
Pounding in the selfish coves,
that keeps us both
apart.


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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2002-08-05 05:06 PM


this poem reminds me of my parents. it really does. it really does
Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
2 posted 2002-08-05 05:54 PM


So very well done, bags...It brings back many fond memories of my sailing days with my first husband.
~ hugs from a sailing chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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