Fevered Dreams (a work in progress)

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Open Poetry #21

Fevered Dreams (a work in progress)

Jason
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since 2002-07-31

Posts 72
Macon, GA

0 posted 2002-08-05 03:45 PM

the fevered dreams
of restless nights
and fantasies
of your delights
that haunt your thoughts
and fill your mind
until you're lost
in what you find
hidden within
your own desires
where it begins
in passion's fires.

Jason Daniels

Practiced in the Art of Perception

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-08-05 04:03 PM

That flamed down
the pages
Jason...
I thought your muse
was on haitus?

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

2 posted 2002-08-05 04:19 PM

Jason, I liked this one so much that I hope you'll continue on and not stop here. Make it longer. I enjoyed the depth. Nicely done, sir.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-08-05 04:20 PM

Jason - very nicely done. I look forward to reading more...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-05 08:18 PM

YAY!!! Oh Jason, yay, your muse returned here, you always write so beautifully when you do, sweet friend, may you always have sweet dreams that bring a smile tyo your face, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

5 posted 2002-08-05 08:20 PM

Your muse has returned with a passion. Very nice.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2002-08-06 12:51 PM

Your iambic dimeter is still intact, m'friend...

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

7 posted 2002-08-14 01:48 AM

another nice one here. Its great to see you still have Passion.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

chitsank
Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 88

8 posted 2002-08-14 01:56 AM

Nice work. short and sweet. ENjoyed reading

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