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Jason
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Macon, GA

0 posted 2002-08-05 03:42 PM



I have nothing new to share today
it seems my muse has gone away
and taken every thought I'd had
I hate it when he behaves so bad
hiding in some darkened corner
or maybe he's gone out to dinner
or to see a movie, or a play
all I know is , he's gone away
and left me too little to say.....
I miss my muse on days like this
when I make rhymes that make no sense


Jason Daniels


Practiced in the Art of Perception

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-05 03:45 PM



but it does make sense
to mourn the loss
of just one day
with words at cost
when treasures seek
to find the way
into the pockets
though they be frayed...

carry me a pocketful
of poems of my poet friends
carry me a pocketful
of thoughts that find a way to mend...

Auguste
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2 posted 2002-08-05 04:34 PM


Hi Jason!  My muse is female and only makes an appearance when I'm not in the mood to write. LOL!  Good to read you.
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3 posted 2002-08-05 08:12 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Jason, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I'm sorry your muse has been down today but always look around you and will find something that will make your muse sing on and on! (sigh) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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4 posted 2002-08-05 08:21 PM


Seems your muse was just hiding for a time.
Nan
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5 posted 2002-08-05 11:21 PM


Oh well... At times like this perhaps you should just reach into your archives.. You must have some poetic 'classic beauties' hiding there somewhere...
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