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Blue Kitty
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since 2002-08-05
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0 posted 2002-08-05 02:46 PM


Where goes the pain,
That makes a dark stain on the beating heart?
Why does memory
Cause the tears to be as it tears me apart?
Who will take it away,
And make happiness stay, giving me another start.

P.


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-08-05 03:17 PM



A poet who plays with words
such as you do,
is assured of being read
by someone like me...

thank you!

Blue Kitty
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since 2002-08-05
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2 posted 2002-08-05 03:31 PM


Oh, sunshine, one of my favorite things, even if it is a little too much at times, but I love the warmth of it on my skin. Thank you and shine on!!

P.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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3 posted 2002-08-05 03:36 PM


You.
Standing in faith, believing.


A well-done plaintive cry.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-08-05 05:40 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I know how you feel, sweet friend, but as long as you stay faithful to your heart and believe in what your heart desires you will find all the comfort you need! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! Youn have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-08-05 05:45 PM


A lovely little poem...well written and very special to word people like poets...
Welcome to Piptalk
~ hugs from a chipmunk (to a kitty...wow I'm a brave chipmunk)

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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