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Street Poet
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since 2002-07-07
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0 posted 2002-08-05 11:32 AM


Girl let's getaway
Let's getaway from all the madness in the world
Let's go to the islands and relax
talk about love and message both of our backs
Let's make that pure love
On the white sand while the blue water runs through our hands
Let's sit uder a tree and watch the moon
And talk about how in the spring we watch the flowers bloom
Girl let's getaway
Let's go to paris and enjoy rich french wine
And foreign foods that are one of a kind
Let's visit the Effel Tower
And secretly make love there for about an hour
Girl let's getaway
As we look into each other's eyes
Where the flame of love never dies
Girl just go on a love getaway with me


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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2002-08-05 11:44 AM


now if I were a girl and not an 'old lady' I'd be there, right now

too, too inviting, hehehehe

but then I do have my scruples, too

I'd have to become more than 'a girl' to you

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2002-08-05 11:51 AM


Street Poet - sounds just like a place I need to be for a while to relax, play, think, and make love...

BC

Nan
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3 posted 2002-08-05 11:58 AM


a 'Love Getaway' is a plan indeed - Nice write, Street Poet...
bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
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4 posted 2002-08-06 01:40 PM


Awww...

Said if I only could ...
-KB

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2002-08-12 02:16 AM


Like this...James
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
6 posted 2002-08-12 09:36 AM


This is very sweet. I had the B52's playing in my head when I read it though. Not your fault. Just the title immediately made that happen. This is a lovely poem :-)
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