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cjohnson/poet2079
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0 posted 2002-08-05 11:21 AM


"I SenSe" is a poem from a collection called,
Echoes Of The Heart. A special friend and I respond-
ed to each others poems.
Carolyn:I sense the presence of love, a love that
fills a void...I pursue the presence of
love, long awaited for...I embrace the
essence of love, void of all confusion,
a love that's real and true, not just an
illusion...
Shaheed: ...I sense a love, I claim it to be real
enhancing my thought of response, some-
thing that I feel; I sense your presence
in everything I do, unfolding with happi-
ness a love that's true...




eyssence

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-05-2002 02:45 PM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-08-05 11:33 AM



Smiling at your Constructive Critique message, CJohnson...Welcome to Passions!  As far as being a poem, I guess you could call a sharing of ideas framed this way, a poem.  If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact a moderator.  And, do check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2002-08-05 12:01 PM


cjohnson/poet2079 - nice write. Welcome to this place of poetry where people are warm and friendly...

BC

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-08-05 01:28 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Interesting first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2002-08-05 01:38 PM


welcome to Passions! nice to have you here.
CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
5 posted 2002-08-05 02:03 PM


Welcome to passions!Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to you sharing some more..and thanks for your kind words on my post.
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-08-05 02:38 PM


Welcome to Passions.  I look forward to more of your work.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-08-05 07:36 PM




WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, this is an original and dazzling debut, sweet friend, there is always poetry in communication and that is the miracle of it, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggssssss) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-08-05 08:02 PM


Carolyn~
Welcome to Passions~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
9 posted 2002-08-05 09:28 PM


Welcome fellow poet, to the depths of the blue pages.  Hope you enjoy these days as much as I have. Talent and poise...
ThisDiamond

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