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secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
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Grean Earth ,,,

0 posted 2002-08-05 07:24 AM


I woke up in the morning...moved to the window..
Watching the natural...breathing the cure air..
Lisening to the birds while they are singing and dancing in the blue sky..

I looked a round me..behind me..and back of me..
I asked my self..where I am..
looking to the mirror...trying to find my self..
To know who I am inside..and outside..
Trying to guess in which day we are..
Thinking about what I did last day..And what I will do
at this moment...

Many ideas comes to my mind at the same time...
Thinking about my life..
Feeling that I am the only one in this world..
Suddenly, I got my self in this new world..
In early morning..with new feelings..new way of thinking..

Walking with the river..Alone..No people..Just alone in this new world..
Walking with no ends..
Still breathing and breathing..

Back again to my window..watching the dark night..
Back to my bed..
Moved to the second new world..In my dream..
New world...and New soul..
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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1 posted 2002-08-05 11:29 AM


Extraordinary thoughts... Enjoyed it!

Neeraja

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-05 08:29 PM




(big huggssssss) Oh my gosh, I know just how you feel, sometimes I find tears in reality I just love to dream away and find happiness in that new frontier! (sigh) This is wonderful and filled with so much thought, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
3 posted 2002-08-05 08:33 PM


This is lovely. I like the idea of living in new worlds. Very nice write here.
Night Shadow
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since 2002-08-04
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4 posted 2002-08-06 04:23 PM


As always i love ur cute words and this time u attractive me to ur new world.
Hope u the best Secret, and good luck.

Night Shadow

secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,
5 posted 2002-08-07 09:04 AM


Thanx Neeraja,, Iam really happy that u enjoyed it thats makes me really proud..


You Mistletoe Angel,,Thanx alot for ur cute words and ur support Iam happy that u feel me...Iam proud that u have read my words dear..coz u have avery sweet heart..
Hugggss to u too..


And u WhiteRose,, thanx for ur sweet opinion U know u also have avery good writting, I always read urs and its very interesting..
thanx


Night Shadow, U know Iam really happy that u loved my words and proud that attractived u,,coz u have an angle heart...as always u read my words and iam happy for that..

thanx alot,,


Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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