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wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2002-08-04 07:54 PM


How?


How can it be
Possible

To miss the sound  
Of voice, never heard

To miss the warmth
Of a hand, never held

Or the rhythm
Of a heart never felt

Or the sweet salt
Of a tear, never tasted

How can it be
That it happens to me?
~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

© Copyright 2002 E.F.Rose - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-08-04 07:58 PM


*grumble* wishing I were her-- and ME, a NEWLYWED! HA!

and yet, I do know, how CAN y'miss what ya never had...it's just a soul's longing in search of itself, I guess. lovely and poignant.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-08-04 07:58 PM



Because she said Hello?
Indeed Sir...
how many of us wish
someone like you
would write for someone
like we?

I Enjoyed This...
so will she!

Martie
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3 posted 2002-08-04 08:02 PM


wranx

The heart knows things that the senses never dreamed of.  This piece of tender writing proves it.

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-08-04 08:02 PM


You already have your answer...not far fetched at all.
Well said. ThisDiamond

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-08-04 08:10 PM


Gee Thanx
Mr.Wranx
I take this as a compliment...LOL

yes you win
you make me spin

~ hugs from a crazy spinning chipunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Duncan
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6 posted 2002-08-04 08:44 PM


Don't know but it happened to me, too and I'm still shaking my head...lol.


I
I was standing
You were there
Two worlds collided...

INXS

Lisann
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7 posted 2002-08-04 09:51 PM


longing for something you've never had but wanting so desperately is a pain we've all had i'm sure.............nicely expressed.
Krishankins
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8 posted 2002-08-04 10:44 PM


Wonderful job wranx!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

WhileIWasGone
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9 posted 2002-08-04 11:30 PM


wranx....so beautiful...very very lucky girl!

A dream so small yet so obsessive

My Secret Love, you hold me close in the darkest of nights
You're soft hand resting across my back
And your fingers soothing the restlessness that lives deep in my heart

You're dancing across my breath and into my soul
And whispering to the secret places I hold dear

In the watery pools of my spirit I see your reflection
And your soft tears wash away my deepest despairs

The moments I spend with you
Are the ones I will cherish in my heart forever
My Secret Love

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23
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10 posted 2002-08-05 05:07 AM


Wow this is great! And it can happen through the touch of words where feelings felt!

mycafe


Keep counting your blessings

[This message has been edited by mycafe (08-05-2002 05:09 AM).]

cjohnson/poet2079
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11 posted 2002-08-05 07:11 AM


Great work, Wranx! "I sense the presence of a love long awaited for." eyssence
First time participation!
(cjohnson/poet2079)


Enchantress
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12 posted 2002-08-05 09:00 AM


Dang!!  You are good at this style of writing.  
Make a woman's head spin..you do!!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
13 posted 2002-08-05 09:06 AM


wranx - I'm sure she knows who she is. Nice write...

BC

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14 posted 2002-08-05 06:04 PM


You gone all romantic, wranxy.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

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15 posted 2002-08-05 06:07 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwww, I just know she knows who she is and she will just swoon when nshe reads this, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wranx, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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16 posted 2002-08-06 09:36 AM


wranx,
you are provocative and a minx but I like your work.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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