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HeartBeats
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since 2002-08-03
Posts 16
TX

0 posted 2002-08-04 04:39 PM


its been there lingering on my mind
so real, so gray, so hard to find
a pot of gold at rainbow's end
a fairy tale thats not pretend
its been there throughout the years
the cause of hope, the cause of tears
so nebulous, so undefined
yet, so concrete in its design

when the bells ring
it will come true
my fantasy
my fairy tale
my perfect love
my you

all my life ive dreamed a dream
that never had a chance it seemed
perhaps its was too much to hope
desires stretched beyond life's scope
but it remained there living on
through victories, through things gone wrong
ever present in my heart, my soul
the dream i needed to be whole

when the bells ring
it will come true
my fantasy
my fairy tale
my perfect love
my you  



© Copyright 2002 Michael R. Brenner - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-08-04 04:40 PM


This is quite beautiful.
Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
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2 posted 2002-08-04 04:47 PM


Nice thought Michael,  welcome to PiP....
Hope this is how it is for you...

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