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Lady In White
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0 posted 2002-08-04 10:22 AM




In Knowing

Where do I start when I speak from my heart,
Does my soul step in to then intervene?
Are my intentions as clear as they seem
When from the depths of my feel, I impart
The words of love I would speak from my heart?

How can I know that the words I implore
Leave you replete, your desire to explore
Was now to end as you would have before
You all that you might need, forevermore,
Do you hear my sweet, that I love you more?

Impractical questions muddy my mind
Your eyes won’t rest until they have found mine
Your hand grasping fingers that you would entwine
Electric feelings run rampant, to find
My soul’s center, as lips silently bind.

In winding join, with meld of spirits’ songs
Coming to the point where we both belong
No turning back, from this what is not wrong
Intensity grows, willingly, and strong
no other love, we’ve known this all along

Where do I start then, to speak from my heart,
Does my soul step in to then intervene?
Are my intentions as clear as they seem
That you are all I need, forevermore,
Do you hear, my sweet, that I love you more?


~*~


Artist: Stoyanova
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1 posted 2002-08-04 10:42 AM


beauiful tribute to love

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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2 posted 2002-08-04 10:48 AM


You never cease to amaze me in the depth of
your words or the many paths which could be
taken from them....the mark of a true poetess.  A very gifted one...

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3 posted 2002-08-04 11:20 AM


...Exquisite!!...

Martie
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4 posted 2002-08-04 11:37 AM


Romance is so becoming on you, Lady!  This feels like it came from another time.
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5 posted 2002-08-04 11:55 AM


Wonderful verse, dear Lady... with a wonderful message..

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6 posted 2002-08-05 03:13 PM


how could I not hear
my heart fairly sings with love
you are the author

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2002-08-05 03:32 PM


ms whyte..you do huggy stuff
like naughty lady
with gloves on

lovely romantica ms

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8 posted 2002-08-05 04:38 PM


Nicely Romantic, Lady.  I would like to see more like these.   
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9 posted 2002-08-05 04:43 PM


enjoyed
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10 posted 2002-08-05 05:37 PM




(big huggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, and may you always know how much he loves you and that he will always love you ore each day, sweet friend, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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11 posted 2002-08-05 05:49 PM


A very beautiful romantic poem, Lady In White.
I enjoyed every bit of it.
~ hugs from a chipmunk who loves poetry

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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