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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-08-04 05:07 AM



no more echoes
in the wood
in the shadows
of my foot
no more stomp
of muddied feet--
no more, and then
no less of me...
no, no, sing the hobbit's sing..
no more and yes, no less of me...
sand in quick of muddied sole--
watch me--I am growing old...
sinking in the quick--of sand--

watch me sink.
you'll understand.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-04 08:36 AM


Oh pooh.  Not so.
Go back to bed
You've still the fire
and the match shall burns...

but it's one of those magic kind,
y'know?

The kind that never go out...


Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2002-08-04 11:43 AM


Now don't go changin' on us just cause you comformed a bit ... we still expect toe rings tickling blades of grass from ya.  Sort of like the giggle of mudpies when ya blow on their tummy for us too.
wranx
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3 posted 2002-08-04 11:56 AM


Karenity,
We'll sink, or swim, together (methinks that most of my scribble is sinkspired)


~wranx

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-08-04 02:39 PM


Serenity~

'no less'

And .... mayhaps MORE~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-08-04 02:48 PM


Interesting style, and topic.
Talented write. ThisDiamond

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2002-08-04 03:43 PM


great. I pour my heart out here on the blue pages, and my dear friend, Kari says "oh pooh."

Life sucks.

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-08-04 03:58 PM


serenity,
Excellent write.

Sven
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8 posted 2002-08-05 04:32 PM


quote:
watch me--I am growing old...

not true. . . Goddesses don't age. . . well, at least not in the aspect that you're in they don't. . .

besides. . . if you're aging, what's happening to the rest of us???

walking along the way with you. . .

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catalinamoon
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9 posted 2002-08-05 04:56 PM


Hey you, are you not supposed to be on the honeymoon?
Whatcha doing writing poetry.
You have to live it, so I can, vicariously..
Hugs
Sandra

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