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The Heart
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The Heart |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Many times I have been broken And have often been cast aside A place of warmth and comfort Where so many come to confide I am often filled with love Without me you cannot live I can lift your spirits high Of myself I have much to give I am the symbol of the Valentine And the cupid with his bow Love is manufactured here A place for love to bloom and grow I am in motion |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sue, a perfect write in ode to the 'heart.' Perhaps you can re-post this around Valentines Day as well?!  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I know this special feeling so well for I too feel I have been stricken by my cupid in love for my sweet Joanna! (kiss on cheek) Yay, you must re-post this on Valentines Day, though this is beautiful every day of the year, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Neat poem! Very imaginative. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very lovely, Sue... I love your metaphors of the heart. ~ hugs from my heart to yoursLyra |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Soooooooo great words...I feel it too from ur heart dear friend.. Just keep smilling like Mistletoe Angel told u ,,, keep going ,,good luck Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Soooooooo great words...I feel it too from ur heart dear friend.. Just keep smilling like Mistletoe Angel told u ,,, keep going ,,good luck Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Awwww I wondered where cupid got to  nice writeIf your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Awwww I wondered where cupid got to nice writeIf your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Can't live without a heart or the pen attached to the heart that wrote this.... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
ouch! Now I have a heart pain...thanks. Love what you did with these little words and images. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
a poet is but the cage a protector of the heart the first person to feel its beat the last person tell of its desires Love the 'I am a' approach to this, Sue and so aptly worded, too, amiga! Write as if your soul depended on it! *smiles* Jeff |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Beautifully said~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
As always, Sue, you pen beautiful peoms!! marie [This message has been edited by mycafe (08-05-2002 02:06 AM).] |
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