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Open Poetry #21

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DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

0 posted 2002-08-03 05:17 PM

Seeking only to give
and live past the pain
Longing to let my
love flow like rain
Wanting a companion
who yearns for my soul
To give anything less
would not let me be whole

janmew
Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 134
Canada

1 posted 2002-08-03 06:36 PM

Don, this piece is short but wonderful. I think it's shortness adds to that.

It speaks a truly honourable message.

Jan

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2002-08-03 07:20 PM

and take nothing less...helen

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-08-03 07:45 PM

This piece is both wonderful in its brevity and content. I agree with Helen, take nothing less. Well done.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

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