»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #21
»
Battle Cry
| Open Poetry #21 |
|
Battle Cry |
|
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
|
Forlorn memories ramble round Upon the passing night Like friends returned from battles lost To mourn by the firelight A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Play on words some more, Kris... you do it so very well... |
||
PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
So often I fail to give proper time to pondering memories, for my focus is so on that which is now and is to come. The past, however, can be enjoyed, or learned from. Great write, Kris.  Sincerely, Titus "They say that a hero can save us. I'm not gonna stand here and wait..." |
||
|
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very wise words Kris.... You have said it perfectly.... |
||
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is such pure wisdom, sweet friend, you truly have a golden heart and we are all sooooo blessed to have you share your sentiments with us! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pesky critters love the firelight...great write. I especially like the style of this work. So much said in so few words. ThisDiamond |
||
|
mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
You are such a genius Chris, this is great write!! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
